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Shadows

The ghosts of my past
Always haunting
Tears, grief, blood
These are the images
They give me.
Silent and grave
Except when whispering my name
Their words icy and cold.
Grief-stricken insults,
A scream.
Cold steel words
Like a knife pressed into my heart.
Into my dreams they go,
Turning them into nightmares.
I wake up sweating
But they are there
Phantoms only I can see
Shadows
Ghosts of my past
Always haunting
This is one of my earliest poems. I still need work...
Enjoy!
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Professional Writer
Very interestin'. Keep it up ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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Acalanthide Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Student General Artist
I will, definitely. Thanks for the comment and favourite. :)
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maurawolf99 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012
Whoah...
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Acalanthide Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Student General Artist
A good "Woah" or a bad one? :) I'm kinda scared to upload my story. It's a bit more, shall we say, "controversial".
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maurawolf99 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012
it's a good whoah! Don't worry.
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Acalanthide Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Student General Artist
Thannks. I guess I should upload that other story, huh. Well, I'm going to do that now xD
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goodbye316 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012
i like it. it is very good.
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Acalanthide Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you :)
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Navig Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i love this poem! its like there was astory behind this! :happybounce:
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Acalanthide Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Student General Artist
Wow. Thank you so much! I thought that no one would read this old thing. I am glad you like it!
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